tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6529578790257272569.post7544501016181088173..comments2008-11-17T21:28:02.867-07:00Comments on Writing For the Public to Relate to the Public: Informative Press Release #2 (Draft)Peter Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00289404355429310478noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6529578790257272569.post-55521627463972481352008-02-06T11:42:00.000-07:002008-02-06T11:42:00.000-07:00Very well written. There's a few grammar problems...Very well written. There's a few grammar problems; noticeably in the first paragraph. I didn't see a boiler plate either. Great job overall.Corey Sparkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02953220911287682124noreply@blogger.com